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Luka Eutychia ([personal profile] eutychia) wrote in [community profile] pajamabox 2019-12-16 02:08 am (UTC)

"I have some criticisms." Luka says immediately, raising his hand in the air. But he doesn't wait for Six to call on him. After all, the monster openly asked for their thoughts. "The characterization is off. Did the Protector shoot all of us? He wouldn't do that. Not to me, at least."

Luka folds his arms as he sits back down into the chair that once had him shackled.

"Speaking of me," he continues. "I should have played a bigger part. I'd rewrite that ending, too. It's depressing."

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